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As the pen bleeds
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:58:06 PM in AEST
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As these lines make these words
and your eyes slowly read
you start to understand
why my pen always bleeds
you start to see everything
that ive seen in the past
and you feel what its like
when life moves to fast
you feel the heart break
and go through the pain
and you feel what its like
to be stuck in the rain
and as your reading these words
youll come to understand
even though the pen bleeds
its still in my hand!
Copyright ©
vampyrekiss
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2004-11-23 16:58:06]
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Re: As the pen bleeds
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 05:01:46 PM AEST
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| good write...i like the flow of it. |
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Re: As the pen bleeds
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:50:10 PM AEST
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| Tremendously unique! Great write. |
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Re: As the pen bleeds
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 08:58:59 PM AEST
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incredible write your screen name caught my attention thought Id read glad that I did your expression of emotions shines through this though sad
Michelle |
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