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Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 03:59:26 PM in AEST
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I'll put on my mask
The sad look of
Desperation
The depression gleams in my eyes
Pity, sorrow, bulls***
Lies are all we are
Masks on
Faces painted with red dye
And we'll splash some on our wrists
While everyone stares
"Oh poor soul"
Shut up, I'm too much of a wuss
To cut myself
So I'll just put on my mask
Cry for me
Copyright ©
eyesxcriedxout1989
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2004-11-23 15:59:26]
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Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip
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by Nessa_Lee on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:15:22 PM AEST
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I can really relate....and I agree that highschool and the fake ppl there its really all bulls**. But you learn to deal, and eventually its over! Good write!
~*~Nessa Lee~*~ |
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Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 08:39:00 PM AEST
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Disillusionment
very clearly expressed.
But in this case you clearly state
that your High School vampires
are just totally putting on an act.
--Mothy |
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Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 08:00:05 PM AEST
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Hmmm..interesting...
Jenni |
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Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 12:01:22 AM AEST
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| mason this was an excellent excellent write. all your stuff is great but this, this was one of your very very best. great write even greater props |
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Re: Two Tickets for a Guilt Trip
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by shattered_heart on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:22:04 PM AEST
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Your very right. We do all put on masks. We all try to be something we are not, or try to cover up how we really feel. I don't like fake people, but I realize that I am sometimes one of them...Good write, I like it.
- Rachelle |
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