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Going Crazy
Contributed by
GothicGrrl666
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 03:40:07 PM in AEST
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The wounds on my wrists are starting to fester
In my tears I am drowning
The voices in my head laugh at me
They laugh at my failure
They whisper about me...
My room is my sanctuary
I shall never leave it
My head spins and I can't catch my breath
Am I going crazy?
Am I going insane?
My head likes to torture me
torture me with it's game
It makes things appear
It makes them go away
I have no control
It does not obey
I slip into a dark sea
Loosing my mind
I'll go crazy in due time
they point and stare
who points?
No body is there
The voices make me hate me
all in all I'm going crazy!
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2004-11-23 15:40:07]
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Re: Going Crazy
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by Nessa_Lee on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:04:52 PM AEST
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I think this was great. I too have felt this way. You expressed it very well.
~*~Nessa Lee~*~ |
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Re: Going Crazy
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 05:16:08 PM AEST
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I think you mean "losing" rather than "loosing," and "nobody" rather than
"no body." Otherwise, you're really letting your emotions go. I think often that is the simple purpose of writing poetry. Keep it up.
Stitch |
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Re: Going Crazy
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by pyro_88 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 06:16:23 PM AEST
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| i know what u mean. i am going through the same thing. great write. keep it up. |
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Re: Going Crazy
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by Vampyre_BloodWraith on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:54:25 AM AEST
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Beautifully dark painting chilling images, embued with loss...and stained in sadness.
Cool write. |
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Re: Going Crazy
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:09:27 AM AEST
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thisis chilling... dark... haunting... scary... good... amazing... it has great style... it's powerful... i could go on for ever but i think you alreadyget the picture about how good your work is, right?
so i wont say any more on that subject, but on another... it's really harsh you're feeling this say, so all i can say is ''get some hep before it's too late''.
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Re: Going Crazy
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by shattered_heart on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:18:05 PM AEST
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We've all bin there...why so many of us go crazy when we are locked up in a room, with only us laughing at ourselves for everything we've done. I can totally relate. Good write.
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Re: Going Crazy
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by OhSaige on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:53:34 PM AEST
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Dark and chilling I really like it
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