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My World
Contributed by
Nessa_Lee
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 03:32:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Welcome to my world.
I live in a world of
hatred, anger,
jelousy, and suicides.
Will somebody help them?
Or am I on my own?
Will they die at an early age
cause their unwanted and unloved?
This world has gone chaotic!
Murders, school shootings,
yelling, crying
When will it all
STOP?!
Is this world gonna
end cause of all this?
We need help,
Jesus,
Please
hold out your hand to
the world.
Don't let go!
Everyone thinks that us
teens have it so easy,
but we don't.
Not when we have friends
wanting to end their life.
Or when we have to make
big decisions,
while people are
yelling and screaming.
I wish my world
would live in peace,
no more fightings, or wars.
Were all family,
it's about time we start
acting like it.
Copyright ©
Nessa_Lee
... [
2004-11-23 15:32:17]
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Re: My World
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:01:09 PM AEST
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*nods head* Yes it is very much like this where I am...it really sucks...but this piece was excellent
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Re: My World
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 05:11:25 PM AEST
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| well said and well done! |
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