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broken inside
Contributed by
cutdeeperXalone
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:51:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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broken inside
she couldnt tell you why she feels this way
but she feels like this every day
confused with all the lies
because she is broken inside
she has too manny problems
she cant fight her dreams
thiers no place to hide
whare she can safely dry her eyes
she is broken inside
she is incompleate and confused
she will never be amused
when he finaly comes home
she will never feel alone
her memory of will never die
with out you she is broken inside
she can put away all her pain
so she can have one more sunny day with you in her life
as the sarrow falls from her eyes
she thinks about how broken she is inside
with out her forever by her side
she walks alone on the avenue of lonelyness
her shadow is the only that will fallow
it wont be long she and him will be together again
she cant fight her dreams
thiers no place to hide
she is forever broken inside
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Re: broken inside
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:54:55 AM AEST
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very deep and sad, good wite, well expressed,
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Re: broken inside
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by Nessa_Lee on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 04:18:26 PM AEST
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Very good write. Keep it up, you have great talent!
~*~Nessa Lee~*~ |
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