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The Long Walk
Contributed by
scubasteve1345
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 08:47:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Walking down a dark road,
I know that I have no one,
No one who'll miss me
I keep walking for miles,
Not looking back,
knowing no one's there
I think to myself,
How, how could this happen,
No one loves me nor cares
I then decide,
This walk will me the last,
And no one will ever know
They'll just forget
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Re: The Long Walk
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:32:31 AM AEST
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Your writes are full of sadness and loneliness. I've taken many metaphorical "long walks," but I have always returned to write another day. It's a good catharsis. Something we can return to whenever the ground drops from under us and we land in one of life's deep valleys.
Keep writing.
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Re: The Long Walk
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by alexb on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:39:47 AM AEST
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| so true, i share many feelings that you are expressing through your poems, i hope you keep writing and posting |
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