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can't get passed the gate
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 03:57:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Standing in this peacefull face,
all the lives lost without a trace,
sting tears hit my face, i am all alone,
looking out over this garden fo grass and stone,
its been nearly 2 long years,
but i still can't get passed my fears,
that if i go much further than just pass this gate,
truely with you will be my final fate,
wind rips through me bitter and cold,
know your not here for me to grow old...
growing old next to you was a dream that will never come true,
i lost my heart, my soul my reason to be whole, when i lost you,
but i still can't get past the gate,
after our last words, were spoken in anger,
and the person i've become is a stranger,
built of all the self hate,
I hate me for yelling at you,
i hate you for leaving all alone,
i hate this GOD d**n garden of stone,
but most of all I hate having lost you...
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2004-11-23 03:57:23]
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Re: can't get passed the gate
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by Pyrofungus on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 01:47:16 PM AEST
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damn...such anger...great job!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: can't get passed the gate
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by ROUGE on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 08:57:10 PM AEST
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| very vivid....such fire i like it. |
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