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Unholy Me

Contributed by isaiyan on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

What have I had to gain?
Absolutely nothing.
There's no one to see me. Heaven's will.
I might need a shrink.
I might need the ampathy.
I might need your company and you will.
I want to feel your gun. I want you to be a part of me. I want your birth.
I was free. Unholy me.
Looking for the perfect. Looking in me.

What can you do? Except laugh at me.
I'll turn my back to you. You can to me.
I will play your game. Only if you play with me.
You can win this unholy heart. Holy me.
I want to feel the sun. It always feels me.
I still want your birth.
Heaven's seed. Unholy me.
Looking for the perfect. Lookin in me.

Copyright Â© isaiyan ... [ 2002-11-22 19:20:00]
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Re: Unholy Me (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 10:53:11 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one alot, you don't have to try and find perfect in you though because perfect in us humans is somthing that cannot be found, i do beleive that each one of us has a beauty, talent, creativity and uniqueness each to our own, which separates us and makes us each different from one another. This gave me alot to think about, thanks for sharing it, Keep em' coming
i really enjoyed this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Unholy Me (User Rating: 1 )
by isaiyan on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 01:10:48 AM AEST
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thank you for your comment. I really do appreciate that you took your time to read my poem

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