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About An Angel
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 01:46:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There is an angel in my life who is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen
She has the saddest eyes mine have ever looked into and I have fallen for her
Her sad eyes and tears tear apart heart apart because I love her with my whole being
She is more than special to me and I more than care for her
Her mouth is beautiful and her lips always have me wanting a kiss
But I dare not kiss such beauty she could easily steal my breath away
And like angels are meant to do lead me to a heaven where I do not want to be
Though I would die happily after kissing her having felt the ultimate bliss
But I do not coz I could not be here to protect my angel if I am led a stray
I would give my soul to feel her soft pail skin that even porcelain and silk envy
I want nothing more than to look at her face and have her hair cover mine
As we lay in my bed forgetting all about gravity space and time
We would be lifted up above the ground by the angels who watch over us
Angels who know a love as pure as what we have can be the only one
Filled with a determination to escape it all and a strong trust
I find my way to escape this world in her eyes and she is the only one
Who has ever made me feel this way and who has made me one of the devout
She is truly my angel and her wings wrap around my whole world
She is more than everything more than I can ever truly let out
Her beauty is amazing to me and sends my heart into an endless twirl
I am alive for her she gives my heart a new reason to beat
She is really all that I will ever need and she will always be so sweet
I will always cherish her ands always more than love her
But she will never really know how much I do love her
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Re: About An Angel
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by WildfireRose on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 02:06:38 AM AEST
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| If it is from the heart it cannot be a bad poem, it was beautiful, I know how you feel ..keep writing you are great at it..:) |
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Re: About An Angel
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 02:09:24 AM AEST
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Not good u gotta be kidding me.
This is a masterpeice of heavenly beauty.
U have a big heart and so much passion to share with this angel.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: About An Angel
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by mylastwords on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 03:00:38 AM AEST
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Hey,
Beautiful write, I love it. Keep it up!
Luv Jade xxooxx |
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Re: About An Angel
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:57:56 PM AEST
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How enchanting! I believe you should give yourself more credit for this one... What a delightful line, But I dare not kiss such beauty she could easily steal my breath away
Magnificent! |
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Re: About An Angel
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:09:38 AM AEST
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I find my way to escape this world in her eyes
I think..You are a wonderful poet and can steal any woman with just this line.. |
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