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Past
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 11:31:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I'm sick of this world and it's people's little games
i'm tired of all the lies from people with no names
always looking down instead of always looking up
it makes you wonder if life is good enough
All the heartbreak thorugh the years
all those dried up lonely tears
the memories that haunt my dreams
life was never as it seemed
So now i give up trying
because of all the things that left me crying
and all those things never seem to go away
and im left here on this earth until my dying day
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Dragontear27
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2004-11-22 23:31:18]
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Re: Past
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by Avarice_Riot on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 11:42:53 PM AEST
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| I can relate completely...I look at the world through the same kind of eyes as you. With all the s**t that's going on in the world it's so easy to close your eyes and give up, but do you just want to sit on the sidewalk feeling sorry for yourself until the day you die, or would you rather get up and achieve something with your life? |
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Re: Past
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 12:00:00 AM AEST
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Don't give up your words are sad for sure. But the way in which you wrote them. You have a talent of which I am sure. "GOOD WRITE"
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Past
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 12:18:47 AM AEST
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