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Image
Contributed by
silverjade
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 08:12:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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take a look in the mirror,
tell me what you see,
are you happy?
are you free?
what bounds you to this image,
certainly not yours,
is it the world?
is it your soul?,
step through,
i will show you
the real you,
give you the strength to
break the image
that youve become
the image thats not really you
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silverjade
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2004-11-22 20:12:10]
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Re: Image
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:13:45 AM AEST
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Now, you're asking me what's really me . . ?
Would you know how to rebuild my image? Could you really see it truthfully enough, to do so effectively?
I believe no man can truly know another, and in this I think your poem's concept is flawed.
It was thought-provoking, though.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Image
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by silverjade on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 07:59:49 AM AEST
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the point of the poem
is me telling people
to stop what they are doing
and look at themselves
sometimes it takes another
to help you realize the
superficial beings that
weve become. |
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