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I Was Beheaded And I WasLoved
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:42:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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grieve the losses of not knowing what to do when lives are at stake
is this all that youve ever known? just living and being fake
you know what to do and you know what to say to avoid being asked the questions that you hate
avoid the love you long for, and accept the hate you feel inside
hold onto the sadistic choices you made, and you now try to hide
fall into the rising of all the ones who have been run over by your infinite hatred towards life
stop, and breathe, for you have bled for far to long now, my dear
for some reason you have pushed aside my acceptance, and accepted your fear
so do not involve me in your failed attempts at life for i shall belittle your insignificent attitudes
openly avoid the youth of your heart for it has made you a person i hate
but in my heart i love you, and for loves sake its not all that late
to forgive your naive little soul that i have loved with all my heart and now you changed its mind
and i walk forward and i wont leave you behind so please hear my cry for you
allow my heart to die happy and come back to me, let me hold my love true
i love, i fail, i truimph, i die... is that how you want my soul to remember the way you loved me... or so you say
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2004-11-22 19:42:54]
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Re: I Was Beheaded And I WasLoved
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 06:20:10 AM AEST
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| I liked the way this way kind of free versed. It was slightly messy, but it gave it an appropriate feeling. You know how in some writing classes they say start writing whatever comes into your head and don't stop for five minutes. Well the above sounds like what would have come out of me style wise. If this doesn't male sense I apologize. So lets just say, it was good. :-) |
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Re: I Was Beheaded And I WasLoved
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 01:37:09 PM AEST
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I thought this was wonderful
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Re: I Was Beheaded And I WasLoved
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 03:34:45 PM AEST
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Lots of emotion...It seems like you had something to say at that very moment and just started writing...from the heart.
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