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Homeless
Contributed by
shattered_heart
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:30:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I can see orange bright lights
on the edge of the street.
It's getting colder outside now,
and I've had nothing to eat.
Where is everyone?
At homes in their beds.
They don't know the hunger,
because they have been fed.
They are warm and cozy,
while I lay without a coat.
Trying not to think of my worries,
I reflect on the poems I have wrote.
I can't run to anyone,
cause they will just turn me away.
I'd buy myself a fear- free night,
but I'd have no way to pay.
Can't believe it's come to this,
I'm sick now and need to be nursed.
I wish I had a home again,
could things get any worse?
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2004-11-22 19:30:07]
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Re: Homeless
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by lil_angel on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:58:15 PM AEST
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| Very thoughtful write! |
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Re: Homeless
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 09:37:16 AM AEST
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This poem hit deep in my heart. i could feel the pain and fear- beautiful, sad and very well done.
Laurie |
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Re: Homeless
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:27:18 AM AEST
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| A very good write. My ex was homeless, so I appreciate people who do not shun or turn their noses up at the less fortunate. Thank you for sharing this sad, but beautiful peice. |
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Re: Homeless
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:12:18 PM AEST
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| this is like my poem my december |
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Re: Homeless
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by kenwells on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 07:39:00 PM AEST
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| Well-written and moving description |
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