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This Ghost Town
Contributed by
bruised_hands08
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:06:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You pass me in the hall,
I close my eyes and stall.
I stop dead in my tracks,
I'm staring at your back.
You laugh at her and smile,
And baby all the while...
My tears tears are running down,
My heart an empty town.
Where no one laughs or dances,
There are no second chances.
A funeral every day.
This pain won't go away.
I fall from up above...
Weak and stuck on love.
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2004-11-22 19:06:52]
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Re: This Ghost Town
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by theMoth on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:42:10 PM AEST
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Memories of middle school.
I'm sure many can relate.
Like the title.
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Re: This Ghost Town
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by freckle on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 10:16:17 PM AEST
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| I like your poem...keep on sharing! |
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Re: This Ghost Town
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 02:08:04 PM AEST
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| Sad and heartfelt. Well-expressed. Keep writing! |
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