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It's a Pity I'm Not Dead
Contributed by
upomik
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:13:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I lie on the floor my head hurts
I've lost all hope of breathing
I'm broken again my world is blurry
I touch my head it's bleeding
The doors are closed the windows are shut
The light refuses to come in
And I don't blame it my life sucks
I'm going to try it again
My first attempt backfired as usual
I ended up passing out
And here I lie on the hard cold floor
Watching my blood leak out
I want to die I've tried many times
Every attempt has failed
Or maybe I'm just a coward one wiht no backbone
Maybe the fear has me impaled
Slowly I sit up and begin to look around
And try to clear my head
People come into focus I'm not alone after all
I'm picked up and thrown on the bed
A question is asked and I turn around
I start to pound him in the head
But I keep my cool and slowly I answer
"It's a pity I'm not dead"
Copyright ©
upomik
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2004-11-22 17:13:12]
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Re: It's a Pity I'm Not Dead
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:17:46 PM AEST
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| sad poem,good one too. |
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Re: It's a Pity I'm Not Dead
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by pixie on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:21:13 PM AEST
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a very sad poem, you are wrong it's not a pity you are not dead. it is a great thing that you are alive *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: It's a Pity I'm Not Dead
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by Stitch on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 06:04:16 PM AEST
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My guess is that it isn't God' will for you to die.
Just a guess.
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Re: It's a Pity I'm Not Dead
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 06:27:23 AM AEST
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Such a moving sad write you did, its so powerfull the way you put it together. i loves the poem
Hugs,
Jane |
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