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Do You Know How it Feels?
Contributed by
EternalNight4x
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:45:29 PM in AEST
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Do you know what it’s like to be a complete outcast?
To be someone remembered only from the past?
Do you know how it feels to hate who you are?
And the only way to move on is to cause yourself harm?
Do you know how it feels to be completely unseen?
And wish when you awake it was only a dream?
Do you know how it feels to be hated by all?
To be someone who’s never gotten up from a fall?
Do you know how it feels to dwell in the past?
And have those memories stay until your last?
Do you know what it’s like to be robbed of your trust?
And have pierced in your back many knifes left to rust?
Do you how it feels to believe none that is said?
To be someone who would be better off dead?
Do you know what it’s like to plan your demise?
And realize nothing would change once you’ve died?
Do you know how it feels to be empty at heart?
To be someone who’s slowly drifting a part?
Do you know what it’s like to sink into dark?
And watch as it leaves it’s fatal mark?
Do you know what it’s like to never be missed?
To be someone who death will soon plant it’s kiss?
Do you know how it feels to stay down once you fall?
And realize to everyone you mean nothing at all?
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Re: Do You Know How it Feels?
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by mysticpoet on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:53:38 PM AEST
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A poem full of questions, but no answers.
I think we have all felt a little like this in the past. It taking a lot of courage to answer the questions and find solutions; good, sensible solutions. Good poem, good rthymn. good luck. |
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Re: Do You Know How it Feels?
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:58:28 PM AEST
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You are NOT, under any circumstances, nothing...You are an amazing poet, and this piece, though very well written, was so far from the truth...You will never be nothing. If you need someone, pm me. Don't give in...don't ever give up...all you need to do is ***** slap death and tell it to get the f*** away...Jesus Christ can help you, trust in him, and all things will be right
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