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A friend I know no more
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:37:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I used to have a friend
She knew everything I felt, thought and went through
She no longer comes around
For I locked her away
For I found a new love
You asked me to put her away for good.
But she has been there since I was 10
For ten years she was there
I don’t want to hurt you
I know I promised I never would
It is just getting harder and harder
I don’t want to hurt you
I love you with everything I have
But I want to visit this dear old friend again
I know I promised you I wouldn’t so I can’t
Would one little short visit really hurt?
One trip down memory lane
Visit the waterfall to see if it still only trickles down.
To watch the sunset turn it’s deepest red
One visit couldn’t hurt that much could it?
You are worried that if I visit this friend
Will I ever return?
I know I promised I would never visit her again
So I will put more chains on her cell
Lengthen her sentence
And strongly walk away
I hope I can for I do not want to cause you any pain
No matter how hard it will be for me
November 14, 2004
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Re: A friend I know no more
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by pixie on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:40:49 PM AEST
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deep and emotionally written,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: A friend I know no more
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:38:54 PM AEST
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| i agree with pixie. great write. friends come into ours lives and sometimes you lose them, but you can never lose yourself. |
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Re: A friend I know no more
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by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 01:36:09 AM AEST
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| That's so sad, but such a lovely poem |
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Re: A friend I know no more
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 12:21:10 PM AEST
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The emotion pours out of this from the words on the page.
Well done
Steve |
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Re: A friend I know no more
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:35:14 PM AEST
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loved lines like 'But I want to visit this dear old friend again
I know I promised you I wouldn’t so I can’t' and 'I hope I can for I do not want to cause you any pain
No matter how hard it will be for me' this is a superb write in my opinion - i will have to check out some more of your work...
feel free to comment on my work also at: http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=Your_Account&op=userinfo&username=overstated
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Re: A friend I know no more
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:15:50 PM AEST
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their are so many aspects of ourselves...
some make us feel good... but only temporarily... and these are the things that are not our true selves... but only a figment of us... and we have to overcome them... regardless of the fight and struggle we must go through...
nice write... :) and well done
havent been on in a while... hope all is well.. |
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Re: A friend I know no more
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by Shnannon on
Friday, 12th August 2005 @ 11:39:05 AM AEST
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You're quite the writer darlin!
I know exactly how this feels...
Keep up the good work! |
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Re: A friend I know no more
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 01:30:25 PM AEST
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| You can never go back.Things are never the same.Never as you remember them.Good Write, Ros |
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Re: A friend I know no more
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 22nd August 2005 @ 12:57:34 AM AEST
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awesome write
"I used to have a friend
She knew everything I felt, thought and went through
She no longer comes around
For I locked her away" this part really stands out to me. i feel these words deep in my heart. good job! |
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