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Hurting
Contributed by
Angelic_Demon
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Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:18:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Even though our love wasn't that strong,
And even when you're gone
I find I'm torn now that we have to say "so long."
I'm glad our friendship isn't going to be done
I didn't think this would hurt so much.
I mean, we only knew each other for two months.
My heart feels like it's being held up by a crutch.
Never again am I sure we should cross paths
I knew that you would have to go back to Nepal,
Perhaps I was foolish in letting this go so far...
You were the first guy I felt like this for, so I gave it my all
Now I'm wondering if I should have just shoved those feelings into a jar.
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Angelic_Demon
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Re: Hurting
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by pixie on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:23:46 PM AEST
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*hugs* I am sorry to hear that, you can't help falling for someone, a very sad, emotional and moving write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Hurting
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:51:31 PM AEST
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I may not have thought much about him, but I am sorry you are hurting, I just wish I could be there for you now, or even have some words of wisdom for you, but love for me is a fantasy that does not exist and so I have nothing helpful to say.
As a poem, I love this and yup, you even managed to rhyme lol. Excellent hun
You're sister
Here for you always
- Becca |
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Re: Hurting
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by yellow_sundragon on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:32:57 AM AEST
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Well then. So I never did comment. But I can make up for that!!
I think that it's a great tribute. And Tom thinks that the entire situation is saddening. Awww, and Tom's a guys guy and even he was touched....
I love you, Mara, and no matter what happens now I know, I KNOW, that your sun will always shine later. Because that's no less than you deserve.
x's and o's....
Jaime |
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Re: Hurting
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:47:22 PM AEST
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awww mara, this is beautiful sweetie, its never wrong to love and better that you did and lost than never had; one grows as a person from love, ive not ever heard you cry your heart out like you have lately, but you will find your truelove, this i know babe, hugs n' love mom xxx
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Re: Hurting
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by Silver-Dragonfly on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 10:43:07 PM AEST
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Mara, this is a beautiful poem and I'm sorry that you're hurting. I wish that I could be there for you more. I hope that you feel better soon.
Take Care,
Lil' Jaime |
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Re: Hurting
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:51:10 PM AEST
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I agree with ladyfawn,
never put your love in a jar...
Live with all your life and love with all your love!
Graet write! |
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Re: Hurting
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by SharonAngel on
Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:41:12 PM AEST
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| i can feel your pain Mara....i feel like that alot....lost....very good write...keep up the good work....you will be great writer. |
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Re: Hurting
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 09:07:17 PM AEST
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| It was a good poem. Writing and expressing yourself creatively is always a good way to deal with life's ups and downs. I will keep you in my prayers. |
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