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cold
Contributed by
tigger
on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:00:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You left me in the cold,
You ran without telling me.
I thought you were a friend,
I confided my heart to you.
After so many years,
Too many years,
You left me all alone.
After all we've been through together,
your heart went like the weather,
cold+dark.
Copyright ©
tigger
... [
2004-11-22 10:00:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: cold
(User Rating: 1 ) by Mangs on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:41:50 AM AEST (User
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nice write...ur doing good! |
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Re: cold
(User Rating: 1 ) by mysticpoet on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:59:00 AM AEST (User
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Good Mornin' Tigger.
Your poem has some good imagery.
I liked it a lot. |
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