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°°°Birth Of The Bikini°°°
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YPDC_Group_Writes
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Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 03:00:00 PM in AEST
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(The poem is set out with the contributing author's name above their contribution to this group write.)
{OreO}
Adam and Eve played in the nude
Till one day the apple she ate
All she wanted was a little food
And suddenly Adam thought she looked great
{MisterRight}
Her beautiful curves
Those voluptuous breasts
This vision of perfection
Adams first test
{LOWMAN613}
Even though Adam did'nt want to deceive,
All he was thinking was being with Eve,
He could'nt hold back the deep feelings he had,
He went with his feelings,when he knew they were bad
{Daniela Maria Violin}
God came along and scolded his ways
He asked "How did you find your wisdom today?"
"I ate from the tree because Eve said I should"
"Now I feel naked so I hide in the wood"
{Jenni Kalicharan}
God then punished Adam for being so weak,
And in the garden they played hide and seek.
After eating of the forbidden fruits,
They no longer felt comfortable in their birthday suits.
{Spaceotter}
So along came the fig leaf bikini you see,
Which led to another bikini or three.
Till now days the bikinis you see,
Are really quiet tiny, oui, oui!
{Rakerman1999}
Yes tiny there are with skin that abounds,
And turns all the guys to a pack of hounds,
Hootin' and whistlin' with eyes that buldge,
All because Eve just had to indulge.
{ginsdance}
But have you forgotten that women were punished,
They have to face these ogling hounds,
And when they try to run away from them...
It's men in tiny bikini bottoms they found...
Sat Nov 02, 2002
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Re: °°°Birth Of The Bikini°°°
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by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 03:36:54 PM AEST
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I personally love the way this turned out, i think it's inspirational to, it may end up helping someone who is having problems writing that just need that little push to help them, and it get's everyone involved. Thanks for allowing us all to do this Mick, i think it was a beautiful idea!
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Re: °°°Birth Of The Bikini°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 05:37:25 AM AEST
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I really had fun doing this and being a part of the group writes. I especially enjoyed this one. Thanks to all involved...
Jenni |
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Re: °°°Birth Of The Bikini°°°
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by kickass on
Thursday, 27th February 2003 @ 01:41:33 PM AEST
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| THIS IS TOTALLY, TTTOOOTTTAAALLLLLYYYY, HOTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, PS OREO RRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ |
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