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Deliver us…someone…
Contributed by
Thivanka
on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:39:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Deliver us…someone…
Tell me how to be happy,
Happy as a frivolous puppy
Who doesn’t care at all;
Or make me the little girl’s doll.
Turn me away from violence,
Make me immune to decadence;
For I wish to see the world as it is—
Droning together as happy bees.
Joining hands let us gaily ride
Through this world with pride;
Make us see right from wrong,
Make us more and more strong.
--Thivanka Perera
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Thivanka
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2004-11-22 07:39:11]
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Re: Deliver us…someone…
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by mysticpoet on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:56:10 AM AEST
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| I like your poem. I wish someone could tell some how to be happy, this world would be a much better place. People have to discover happiness within themselves and maybe this happiness would overflow into others lives. |
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Re: Deliver us…someone…
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by arden on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:50:50 AM AEST
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interesting write.
good flow and wording. i enjoyed this. keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Deliver us…someone…
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 06:34:51 PM AEST
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| great thoughts, nice write, good job. |
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