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Too Much Pain
Contributed by
UnlovedChild
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 11:49:28 PM in AEST
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There is a tear
Streaming down my face
Now another in a different place
I try to wipe it away and smile
But I can't
The pain is too strong
For no tears at all
I can't help but cry
I think of everything bad
Memories flashing in my mind
Makes more tears appear
My eyesight is fading
Becoming a blur
Fears are arising
Waiting to break through
If I let them
Maybe they will take me away
I will go anywhere
Please take me away
I can not take it anymore
Too much pain
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UnlovedChild
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2004-11-21 23:49:28]
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Re: Too Much Pain
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:05:56 AM AEST
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c i told u i'd comment... hehe...
anywho... this is a really good poem... like ur others that i've read... i liked it a lot...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: Too Much Pain
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:18:03 AM AEST
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So sad but written well.
Hope u feel better very soon.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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Re: Too Much Pain
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:27:34 AM AEST
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Aww this is really sad, hang tough Amy dont let them get to you. I really love the way you write its very good.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Too Much Pain
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by Rxqueen on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:15:55 AM AEST
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| I can see your writing greatly improving sweetness!!! This was very good. Keep it up!!! |
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Re: Too Much Pain
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by OnAngelswings on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 09:59:39 AM AEST
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| this is very sad...I do understand oyu...I was so abused and unhappy as a child,even into adulthood...but as we grow and see whats ahead of us and not behind us ,things will change and get better sweetie..hang in tough...Your in my prayers....nicely written though....Shari:) |
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Re: Too Much Pain
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by mysticpoet on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 10:07:24 AM AEST
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A beautifully written but sad poem, UnlovedChild. You are truly Not unloved here,
Great poem |
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