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A poem about you
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:43:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A more than gorgeous and simple splendor
The world’s most beautiful sight
Full of color like an aurora that you should never hide
To journey in them would be a great endeavor
I know it could last more than a lifetime more than forever
To really understand who you really are
I would walk the path in your eyes no matter how far
I am always in your grace always finding what I need in your face
So beautiful and kind always wanting to make you mine
You are more than just a messed up girl you are my entire world
You are more than gorgeous so beautiful beyond all words you I will always adore
I know what I have with you and I will never give up something so true
I will never ever hurt you never ever treat you like dirt and leave you
I love you more than I could ever say and I will never ever stray
By you my angel I have been saved
More than twice blessed I have been made
To feel like I am complete
And you have given my heart a new reason to beat
To see this world in a brand new way
To search the world and better my days
Never again will I walk the streets and never
Will I feel like have to give in to defeat
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Re: A poem about you
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 11:01:46 PM AEST
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| beautiful and amazing. if only my poems sucked as badly as you say this does. |
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Re: A poem about you
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 11:41:05 PM AEST
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No sucks, my friend. It's a great write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: A poem about you
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by mylastwords on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 01:51:02 AM AEST
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hey,
It's beautiful as always. It so does not suck! Keep writing. Talk to you soon.
Luv Jade xxooxx |
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