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I Died Tonight
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:34:26 PM in AEST
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My hearts beating has now stopped
To the floor I slowly dropped
My heart has shattered all over the place
Couldn’t you see the pain in my face
You sat there as though nothing was wrong
I tried so hard to just be strong
But I could not endure anymore pain
It was making me go completely insane
Because of you I died tonight
You took away my only light
Now I walk around as though I were dead
All because you wouldn’t see the tears I shed
I cut myself to be sure I’m still alive
I don’t know how much longer I will survive
Without my heart I’ll surely die
I feel so dead I can’t even cry
Why do you insist on hurting me
Is there some type of pleasure that you see
Is this all some kind of game to you
If it is, you won, its true
You have managed to hurt me the most
Now to all you can surely boast
Laugh and joke do what you please
Because now my life has ceased
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CrimsonTears
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2004-11-21 22:34:26]
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Re: I Died Tonight
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:39:37 PM AEST
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aww this is such a masterpiece and it captures those feelings.. Your feelings should have mattered. what a jerk.. You will find better .. and this is a beatiful sad write and so expressive you can feel the heartache.. I can totally relate i've felt this before.. hang in there you will get through
peace and hope
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Re: I Died Tonight
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:48:24 PM AEST
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i agree entierly
guy s really do not know who they hurt
they never know what they have even when it is lost
they never care
but love does not always hurt |
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Re: I Died Tonight
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:49:46 PM AEST
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| brilliant write. written extremely well. perfection at its finest. |
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Re: I Died Tonight
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 11:08:42 PM AEST
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awww... this so sad...
i'm sorry they didn't care... i wish all tha best for u... and i hope u can find sumone better than that in tha future...
~!*!~hugs~!*!~
~!*!~jishes~!*!~ |
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Re: I Died Tonight
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by Rxqueen on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 05:19:39 AM AEST
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| Loved it! It felt like it was my life story! Very good writing! Thanks for sharing, I connected deeply. |
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Re: I Died Tonight
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by Hollie85 on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 06:12:32 AM AEST
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| Fantastic poem. It tells a story and the reader can visulise the pain, the words are so vivid. Men are cruel fools. You'll find a man to treat you how you should be. Be strong. |
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Re: I Died Tonight
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 06:47:17 AM AEST
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This is brilliant, it has so much depth to it. I really love the way you expressed yourself with this piece. I can relate to it alot so thank you for sharing this beautiful work.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: I Died Tonight
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:31:54 PM AEST
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| Again, Amazing. You are a great writer. |
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