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Am I An Illusion
Contributed by
maryetta
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:18:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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as i look into the mirror i see this sad lonely woman
do i know you i ask all she does is stare back at me
she looks vaguely familar this sad lonely woman
but she wont answer i feel sad for her somehow
is this really me or am i an illusion
if she would only talk to me maybe i could help her
but her eyes only look at me imploringly only stares
why do i feel i know her why do i feel i share her pain
if only she would speak to me to solve this mystery
is this really me or am i an illusion
but she doesnt have to speak for now i do know her
i have looked into her eyes many nights and denied her
i didnt want to know the truth i didnt want to believe them
i can no longer ignore the pain she visualizes to me anymore
is this really me or am i an illusion
i will not longer live with this pain and agony
i cannot look into these sad eyes anymore
no one has the right to cause that much pain
i have to smile again i have to be happy again
is this really me or am i an illusion
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maryetta
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2004-11-21 22:18:54]
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Re: Am I An Illusion
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:36:58 PM AEST
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Sad but written well.
Hang tuff, my friend.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy |
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Re: Am I An Illusion
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:41:54 PM AEST
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aww this is a sad write but very expressive and great write
Peace and hope
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Re: Am I An Illusion
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by Doriens_Picture on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:50:15 PM AEST
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| this is a really good write i had to read it coz of the title |
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