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Little girl
Contributed by
LostDream
on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Your insecurety
walked
beside my life.
Hand in hand,
it scrutinized it silently,
indifferent.
Maybe it understood many things
that my silly little girl's
smiles
ignored.
Your indecision,
constant and painful,
left
my days
full of rain
and little girl's
tears.
I'm a little girl,
I know.
But I love you
in a way,
so innocent and lively,
so sincere and bold...
just the way a little girl
can love
a man.
Copyright ©
LostDream
... [
2002-11-22 12:30:00]
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Re: Little girl
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 12:43:03 PM AEST
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| aaww I really liked this poem! Christina |
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Re: Little girl
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 12:48:09 PM AEST
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So simple, so beautiful..and so innocent... Just lovely!!!
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Re: Little girl
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by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 02:42:49 PM AEST
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This is so sweet, very beautifully
written. Thanks for sharing t his one
I enjoyd it alot. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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