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If I Were Gino Smooth
Contributed by
Aquaelius
on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:53:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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If I were Gino Smooth,
The doors would open by themselves,
the bouncers would want to shake my hand.
The bartenders would know my name.
If I were Gino Smooth,
The house would pay for me,
happy in the fact that I had come.
The owner would come and sit with me.
If I were Gino Smooth,
I would look at the most beautiful woman there,
and she would look at me.
There's no way she could say no.
If I were Gino Smooth,
Everyone would stand off to the side,
and I would do my dance.
And then... applause.
If I were Gino Smooth,
I'd take the underdog,
Make him feel like the top.
He would get the second most beautiful woman there.
I'm not Gino Smooth,
But if I were... I'd be happy being Gino Smooth,
just like I'm happy being me.
Only smoother.
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Aquaelius
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2004-11-21 16:53:53]
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Re: If I Were Gino Smooth
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:01:51 PM AEST
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lol. nice. Smooth, even.
Keep writing. |
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Re: If I Were Gino Smooth
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:23:29 PM AEST
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Very creative thinking and writing. It also has a humerous side.
Luv your positive attitude.
Awesomely written.
a masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
Well with your pen I have a feeling u could still get the most beautifull one in the house but remember beauty is only skin deep. |
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Re: If I Were Gino Smooth
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by Oriana on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:10:47 PM AEST
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lol....I love this poem. It's just brighten my day!!!. ^_^ Thankyou sooo much for writing it!
*Gives you a big cookie*
Oriana |
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Re: If I Were Gino Smooth
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 05:35:03 AM AEST
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| I liked this. If you are Gino smoothe, can I come out with you. I want the house to pay for me too!!!!!! |
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