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My Darling Rain
Contributed by
bruised_hands08
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:13:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Bring the rain, wash my face.
Take me from this lonely place.
I turn around, there you are...
I'm still wishing on our star.
Won't you come back?
Can't you see just how much you mean to me?
I can't survive without your touch.
Baby, I miss you too damn much.
Your hair, your eyes. Your smile, your kiss.
Won't you stay right now like this?
You can't love her more than me...
Will it take my death to see?
I should die, bleed right now.
Come my darling, show me how.
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2004-11-21 16:13:17]
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Re: My Darling Rain
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:36:54 PM AEST
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thats a short and depressing poem.
*look* for the kleenex box. |
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Re: My Darling Rain
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by Oriana on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:53:27 PM AEST
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That kicks ass. Pardon my French, but that awsome. I love it!
*Gives you a hug and a cookie*
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Re: My Darling Rain
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by Stitch on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 09:08:37 AM AEST
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So much desperation and sadness here. Doesn't everyone go through a time like this?Hopefully it will be over swiftly and you will move on one way or another.
Stitch |
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