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Blue Roses
Contributed by
bruised_hands08
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:10:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's not getting better.
It probably should.
It's not getting better.
You promised it would.
The wounds would get better.
Eventually Close.
But I am still open.
A terrified rose.
Lonely and Scared.
I can't find myself.
And now I am just...
A cold, empty shelf.
I can still see your face,
Your eyes are so blue.
I'll never get better.
I'll always miss you.
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bruised_hands08
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2004-11-21 16:10:22]
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Re: Blue Roses
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:40:52 PM AEST
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| Love how you describe yourself as a flower with feelings. |
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Re: Blue Roses
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 07:54:20 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC! I enjoyed this first post of yours. The title drew me in... *sigh*... blue roses, it sooo works.
Nicely done! Hope you stick around and keep posting...
SNM |
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Re: Blue Roses
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:34:07 AM AEST
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Nice bit of self-promotion.
I like this poem, but feel you forced it out a bit with rhyming self and shelf.
Keep writing. |
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Re: Blue Roses
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:04:48 PM AEST
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You were absolutely right.
It's a good poem.
And a good poet knows
their best stuff.
--Mothy |
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