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The Pit
Contributed by
Chaos
on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 11:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I’m standing on the edge of a pit
A pit of deep despair and anger.
I look over the edge into the unknown depths
And stop.
I stand nearer to the edge
Peering into the dark depression
And the ground beneath my feet begins
To crumble.
Time stands still.
All around me my life, my soul
My reason to live
Fades away.
Time is evil
Time rules ruthlessly
Time gives nothing to anybody who asks for
A little help.
The earth under me crumbles
Falling into that evil pit
And I know that I will soon
Follow.
Never to be seen again.
Copyright ©
Chaos
... [
2002-11-22 11:45:00]
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Re: The Pit
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by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 11:50:09 AM AEST
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Very deep poem, full of so
much pain and hurt, Thanks
for sharing this one and
Keep em' coming id like
to read more of your poetry
my friend..
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: The Pit
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 11:57:30 AM AEST
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I'm glad you're over this tough time..and are able to write about it...so beautifully..
Jenni |
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Re: The Pit
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by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 03:22:51 PM AEST
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i'll be coming back
to read more from
you in the future
peace for now :*) |
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