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Closer than Ever
Contributed by
Nezenic
on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:24:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Maybe it's only my fear
To expose to others these tears
Tonight I am closer than ever
to suicide
That I think I will heal never
but I'm afraid to say good-bye
I wonder when will I die
I hope that it will be tonight
I am a pitiful loser
hopeless and meaningless
Dare I abuse her?
she thinks she's better than me, than this
I hate my life
I just stare at the sky and cry
Bloody tears and bloody veins
death lingering
A feeling so helpful, yet so strange
suicide singing
The end of my life...
...on the phone...
...ringing...
Copyright ©
Nezenic
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2004-11-21 13:24:16]
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Re: Closer than Ever
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:42:13 PM AEST
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Very sad but u exspress your feelings well.
Hang tuff, my friend.
I know it's hard in life but it's easy to die. Choose life as all life isn't bad.
I will put u in my prayers and pray this is jus very convencing writting.
If u need a friend p.m. me any time.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
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Re: Closer than Ever
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by DeadInside on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:53:29 PM AEST
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very sad, but well written, i like it because i can relate to it.
-Autumn- |
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Re: Closer than Ever
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:54:42 PM AEST
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| hopefully this is just venting..if not; I almost died after a suicide attempt. I feel unwanted and useless..ugly and low..but when I saw the devastation that I nearly left behind..my neighbor had to clean up the blood even though I did it in the tub and tried to be clean about it..there was a mess left. My grandchildren saw my naked bleeding body carried out..they were traumatized and feel guilt to this day.. so it's a very selfish thing to do.. Don't give in to self pity.. there is a better way and writing like you are doing is one way.. good job because I feel your pain.. keep reaching out. |
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