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Final Performance
Contributed by
matt73
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 12:37:42 PM in AEST
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Composition of memory
thought's conductor
a symphonic intuition
masterpiece of a stranger
On the stage of conclusion
the man strums his youth
In a crowd of listeners
the man plays his truths
Profound sounds of wisdom
an unwinding harmony
A melody of a soul
A story being told
The crowd smiles
breaks their self pity
they stand in ovation
clap with their dignity
Rising to his feet
the man looks around
see's the smiles
hear's the sounds
A sound of completence
his que to depart
his composition of memory
now his legacy.
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matt73
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2004-11-21 12:37:42]
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Re: Final Performance
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:24:39 PM AEST
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I enjoyed the style, although I had to read it twice. I think its really high up there..a sort of msterpiece.. It's crisp and clear ..
his composition of memory
now his legacy.
I keep going over that in my mind and wonder if that doesn't fit us all somehow? |
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Re: Final Performance
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 03:54:02 PM AEST
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| =] i liked your title and your piece very much. i espeically liked the last stanza. |
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