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Sorry
Contributed by
Lost_butterfly
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:00:01 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Sorry if im not beautiful and if you think im fake. Sorry if my hairs to long and you think im underweight. Sorry i love music and cant stand many sports. Sorry my skin isnt perfect and if im always lost in my thoughts. Sorry i dont wear your brands or hang out with your "crew" sorry i think you all act the same why cant you just be you?! Sorry if i paint my nails black and i ever seem shy, sory i can get argumentative and always start to cry.Sorry i get obsessive and drink my herbal tea, sorry if im always hyper i guess that is just me.
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Re: Sorry
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:07:43 PM AEST
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Thanks for writing this. Its very good, you know. I hope he's had a chance to read it, then he might understand . . .
Anyways - if you could carriage return every period/fullstop, it would make this poem read a bit better, as it looks like a big paragraph as it is.
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Re: Sorry
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by Sinned on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 08:21:43 AM AEST
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Sorry
You needen't be sorry except for this boy.Most are afraid to be themselves and act and do what others want.Don't change be yourself if someone likes or loves you he will want you as you are--You
Good write.
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