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prayer for the children
Contributed by
cinderella88
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:36:38 AM in AEST
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children weep
tears of pain
reach out for love
to keep them sane
find only hate
instead of hope
which tightens the noose
now made of rope
silent tears
seem to fall
more than the smiles
which dont come at all
in this broken world
made of broken dreams
clouded with so much pain
nothings as it seems
Copyright ©
cinderella88
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2004-11-21 04:36:38]
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Re: prayer for the children
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by shattered_heart on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 08:28:05 AM AEST
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| I think it's good even if it was something you wrote a while ago. |
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Re: prayer for the children
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by freespirit on
Sunday, 20th February 2005 @ 12:15:23 AM AEST
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| Nice poem i like it |
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Re: prayer for the children
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by Rylo on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 11:07:08 PM AEST
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| Excellent writing and so very true. |
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