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The scary house
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:51:34 PM in AEST
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There is someone in my house
Their footsteps as quiet as a mouse
I can hear them still
I can see thier eyes above the windowseal
I can hear the mumur of their vioce
I think I will die at chioce
My hands become clamy
O I sure will miss my family
I can not see you now
but I feel your presents somehow
My leg is tingling
The windchimes keep dingling
The house becomes eiree
A misty fog becomes of the air
I turn fast to see YOu
but you are not there
My heart start to slow
But just in time for the real show
I hear a distace creaking of the floor
My heart begins to beat fast once more
I glance towards the darkness
Nothing but the whites of your eyes gleam
O boy I sure hope this is a bad dream
I can not see your feet move
But your breathing and mine become a groove
closer and closer you creep
shall I lay down and pretend to be asleep?
I feel your feet move through the air
I can not move I am to scared
I see your white teeth as your mouth opens wide
I'm sweating on the outside but screaming inside
I'm waiting for a loud roar or something of the sort
Maybe a death wish something short
But the sound is always the same
My little sister calling my name
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Re: The scary house
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by girltranscended on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 12:00:07 AM AEST
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WOW. The ending was not what I expected. And it mandated I re-read the whole thing, with a little more understanding. Great job!
My fav lines...
The windchimes keep dingling...
Nothing but the whites of your eyes gleam
Oh boy I sure hope this is a bad dream...
Maybe a death wish, something short...
Thanks for sharing, I loved it! :) |
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Re: The scary house
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by brokenwings on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:26:24 AM AEST
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| i don't know why but i got a laugh from this maybe because i do the same thing when one of my little neices comes to my bed side for some thing...but it was cute good job |
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