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In a velvet cape and satin feathered wings
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:42:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In a room
Four walls painted purple
A bed of roses is undone
Two lovers are intertwined
In a velvet cape and satin feathered wings
Finding whole universes in each others eyes
Eyes filled with determination to escape it all
With kisses that take all breathe away
Dressed in each others arms
They find that way
In a sweet unity and bound by more than just lust
Breaking all concepts of love and finding something new
Nothing is as warm as that
Both so beautiful and full of color
Both two parts of one soul
They are perfect there
With petals in hair and lips to lips
He carried her in his arms and holds her high
Then brings her down close to him
And they kiss again just as sweetly as before
She leads him back to the bed and he follows
She lies down and he’s on top
These two lovers are you and I
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2004-11-20 22:42:20]
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Re: In a velvet cape and satin feathered wings
(User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 03:57:30 PM AEST
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This is amazing....I cant believe no one has commented on it!
The imagery is so perfect and full of feeling..
wow i just love it so much!
Take care
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Re: In a velvet cape and satin feathered wings
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by WildfireRose on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 11:04:39 PM AEST
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| wow...very nice...I love how it flowed so nicely..great job :) |
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Re: In a velvet cape and satin feathered wings
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by Gothchyk on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 11:12:59 PM AEST
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Beautiful write.
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