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why
Contributed by
amatt
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:29:22 PM in AEST
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youve seen it before
the fake
the real
the lost
the hated
the loved
the lonely
the numb
the fear
the pain
its all not clear
why
no one
is treated fair
mistreated and beated
talk about
instead of talking too
look past
instead of looked at
Copyright ©
amatt
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2004-11-20 22:29:22]
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Re: why
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by shattered_heart on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:34:37 PM AEST
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| It's so true, things are exactly like that. You must be really observant. I like it. |
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Re: why
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by Freda_Burrel on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:55:37 PM AEST
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| good poem !!! its just like life..... well written |
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Re: why
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:56:24 PM AEST
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| very good write. truthful to every extent. |
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Re: why
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 12:05:21 AM AEST
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wow this is an awesome and powerful write.. so truthful.. if people would talk to eachother instead of about eachother things would work out
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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