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Empty Pages (Quatern)
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:26:59 PM in AEST
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Empty pages lie in my mind
pondering about what to write,
words are blurred, I feel like I'm blind
while I sit here so late at night.
I venture in the dark places
empty pages lie in my mind,
all I find is lonely spaces
lost words floating, as if confined.
Catching up, but falling behind
trying to find some bit of light,
empty pages lie in my mind
words to paper, they must unite.
I will never give up the fight
darkness and words remain entwined,
behind a door, locked up airtight
empty pages lie in my mind.
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Nov.20/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
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2004-11-20 22:26:59]
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Re: Empty Pages (Quatern)
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by THORN on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:42:44 PM AEST
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That's a good one, dispite the fact that the poem's meaning actually changes half way through.
Thanks for sharing!
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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Re: Empty Pages (Quatern)
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:00:10 PM AEST
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| brilliant write. perfect in every way. |
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Re: Empty Pages (Quatern)
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 03:36:55 AM AEST
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| so many emotions go along with writers block.... :) |
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Re: Empty Pages (Quatern)
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:02:14 AM AEST
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| I didn't see a change midway..but its late, I'm sad and mad and not seeing straight..I thought it was great all the way through..by the end you still weren't writing so where's the change??? |
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Re: Empty Pages (Quatern)
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by arden on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:39:51 PM AEST
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God cynth...
just..wow...
you took a gaint leap with your writtings with this. its so amazing girl.
there just so much that this poem has
I will never give up the fight
darkness and words remain entwined,
behind a door, locked up airtight
empty pages lie in my mind.
i love that. hun, i seriously cant believe what im seeing, this poem is just so awesome.
i loved it. great, great work.
wish i could give more then just 5 stars.
beautiful..
Becky |
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