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My Fear
Contributed by
springchic1979
on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 10:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My mind overwhelms with fear
As I awake from a restful night.
I feel my body start to sweat
And I fumble with the light.
My fragile frame trembles.
My heart begins to race.
I resist the urge to scream
As tears stream down my face.
In a deep and peaceful sleep
Is where I wish to be,
And death is serene slumber
For all eternity.
Backing myself against the wall
I long for the will to die.
Hugging my knees against my chest
I close my eyes and cry.
Why did it take so many years
For me to finally see.
The only nightmare that I fear
Is waking reality.
Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©2001 Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©
springchic1979
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2002-11-22 10:15:00]
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Re: My Fear
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by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 12:14:22 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written
I do beleive everyone has that
fear of reality, many people don't
want to face reality of anything in life
I really enjoyed this one alot
Thanks for sharing it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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Re: My Fear
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 01:21:36 PM AEST
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| Great write ... I have been feeling this today ... thanks for sharing. |
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Re: My Fear
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 11:26:55 AM AEST
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I agree Oreo, facing reality is not easy for people especially when the whole world seems to be against them.
Thank you for your compliment, Oreo, it brought me a smile. :)
Yvonne |
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Re: My Fear
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by springchic1979 on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 11:28:32 AM AEST
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I'm sorry to hear you are feeling this way Dreamweaver, I hope everything gets better for you real soon. *hugs*
Yvonne |
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Re: My Fear
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by AngryBunny on
Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 12:03:13 AM AEST
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| That was just awesome, plain and simple. |
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Re: My Fear
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by springchic1979 on
Sunday, 1st December 2002 @ 09:00:25 AM AEST
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Thank you AngryBunny that was very sweet of you to say :)
Yvonne |
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Re: My Fear
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by Paul on
Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:15:49 PM AEST
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| thats pretty crazy.....I like it. |
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Re: My Fear
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by springchic1979 on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 08:49:47 PM AEST
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Thank you Paul, I am glad you liked it. :)
Yvonne |
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