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The Rose
Contributed by
shattered_heart
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:03:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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The flower, the rose.
Silky and elegant.
So beautiful
and full of life.
Full of colour,
that does not fade.
Or so it seems.
Has it's moment
of brightened glory.
Stands still
in only one time.
But then so quickly,
the petals wither
and fall...
The rose bends
and dies.
No more life.
No more colour.
Just what's left,
of true beauty...
Copyright ©
shattered_heart
... [
2004-11-20 22:03:39]
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Re: The Rose
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by THORN on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:31:38 PM AEST
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Very nice, although I would've liked to see more of senses such as smell, but none-the-less, a great write.
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Re: The Rose
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:08:51 AM AEST
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Very simple, very wonderful write. Well done!
Laurie |
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Re: The Rose
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:05:10 PM AEST
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| a rose is someting that should be cherished even after it dies coz it can never be ugly |
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