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simple speech
Contributed by
gimpie
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:57:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
news
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I watch the world
through darkened eyes
and paranoia
is my demise,
The storms above
and pains below
washing over
very slow,
You'll never know
and I refuse
to ever let
myself be used,
Before I die
I'll make you see
how your world
screwed over me!
Copyright ©
gimpie
... [
2004-11-20 21:57:52]
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Re: simple speech
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:59:01 PM AEST
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| good job. i like the flow. |
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Re: simple speech
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 12:57:50 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it |
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Re: simple speech
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 04:06:23 AM AEST
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paranoic ramblings from my son..put to rhyme.
you captured it brilliantly..
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