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There I Bleed
Contributed by
shattered_heart
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:53:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There I bleed
bloody tears
over you...
your dead
cold heart...
I drown
in my own river...
can't breathe,
can't cry,
just inside bleeding...
deep inside.
I feel it dripping,
leaving red scars...
guilty thoughts
you drove me
to the very end...
can't see
what I've become...
blurred vision
of what should be...
I'll die
as if you didn't ever
love me...
Copyright ©
shattered_heart
... [
2004-11-20 21:53:17]
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Re: There I Bleed
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by THORN on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:24:50 PM AEST
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That's a good write, hope everything's ok and keep writing!
Cheers,
-XRaye |
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Re: There I Bleed
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:09:49 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. wondering is the worst things a person goes through sometimes. |
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Re: There I Bleed
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:06:22 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it! |
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Re: There I Bleed
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by CrimsonTears on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:51:03 PM AEST
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this is a great poem...i can relate....excellent job
Lots of Love
CrmsonTears |
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Re: There I Bleed
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:07:15 PM AEST
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| this is just plain sad and what is worse that it is easy to relate to |
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