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An Artist's Tear
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:40:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Like the shards of a broken glass,
My life lays in pieces on the ground.
A collage of pain and misery sums up life;
Every dream shattered, all hopes have broken.
The happy times outweighed by the depressing.
I no longer wish for anything other than sanity.
I once wished death would meet me soon;
I wept each night knowing I would wake.
Though the darkness provided temporary comfort,
Nothing could help the pain of another day.
All that remained for me in life was disappointment.
Death?s ambling about had made me angry.
A mind filled with dark thoughts is where I lived;
It is a place I?d rather not visit ever again.
My life now has meaning, I have a reason to live.
Now I weep at night hoping I will wake again.
Turning from one mind to another in a day,
All it took was a smile that shone through the dark.
Copyright ©
Buggsy
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2004-11-20 21:40:02]
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Re: An Artist's Tear
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by iodinelove on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:47:36 PM AEST
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I knew lots of artists once. Some of them were nice...some of them were alchoholic pigs who had no respect for anything or anyone, which brings me to the conclusion that, yes, even artists are human ^_^
I like this, pain is something everyone feels, just some are more sensitive to it than others, which is why were here, isn't it? |
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Re: An Artist's Tear
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:27:52 PM AEST
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| great write. well written. |
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Re: An Artist's Tear
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:26:29 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it!! |
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Re: An Artist's Tear
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by OhSaige on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 05:01:08 PM AEST
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Great write I love the strong picture the words pain. Thank you.
Saige
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Re: An Artist's Tear
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 06:51:53 AM AEST
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| You've translated your pain well into words, its beautiful to read. Very well-written piece here :) |
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