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Never Be Through With You
Contributed by
juliETTE
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Today was a good day, but I am just as lonely tonight,
Thinking about the last time things really felt right.
Up in the clouds was I, to be sheltered by your arms,
Falling back down here to Earth has hit me oh so hard.
My world is incomplete without the happiness I withdrew
Though I said it was over, I will never be through with you.
The bright fire in my eyes has so quickly faded to gray,
The temperature within my heart, of the coldest December day.
I walk these floors a prisoner knowing I built this cage myself
I cannot lay the blame of our demise on you or anybody else.
Even as I was leaving, deep inside of me I knew
I could say it was over, but I will never be through with you.
I will carry on with my old life because it is what I am supposed to do-
I will let you believe it is over, however cruel,
But I will never be through with you.
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juliETTE
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2004-11-20 20:27:02]
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Re: Never Be Through With You
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by girlg0newrong on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:21:06 PM AEST
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Great write, I liked it.
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Re: Never Be Through With You
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by LEMMEN on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:28:16 PM AEST
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So much sadness so much pain my this one that hurt you know. You are a great person indeed. Just by the you write I can tell you will be a great person. WELL WRITTEN WORDS.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Never Be Through With You
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by iodinelove on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:43:01 PM AEST
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I like december. I like gray days ^_^
love is a cage, and, as my two lil dogs just did, we sometimes walk into cages knowingly; life is about taking risks, and love is the greatest risk to take. Even dying is less painful...which is a wonder why everyone is so afraid of it?!
I like it.....but i keep hitting tab...which will one day drive me insane.....keep up the feeling^_^ |
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Re: Never Be Through With You
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by Always on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 08:19:45 PM AEST
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| Awesome....felt that...*s* |
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