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De Vinci Has Nothing On You
Contributed by
Merry
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:04:40 PM in AEST
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De Vinci has nothing on you
When it comes to fabricating
Imagining the unbelievable
Leave me scratching in the dirt
I’ve been hurt by you before
Set down a peg or two
I’ve got my own set of rules
Tucked in my back pocket
Hunched under a streetlight halo
You said I was an angel
I tried not to explain it
You said it was a miracle
I walked away into the night
Leaving you there to sober up
Leaves swirl around my tangled feet as I
Stumbled down the path of least resistance
You’ve painted my portrait again
Staring me in the face
De Vinci has nothing on you
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-11-20 19:04:40]
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Re: De Vinci Has Nothing On You
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:08:40 PM AEST
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| Once again you leave me in awe..this is wonderful..I sit doing comic strips .. I'm so envious.. really. |
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Re: De Vinci Has Nothing On You
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by Luinil on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:11:33 PM AEST
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| wow beautifully written* |
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Re: De Vinci Has Nothing On You
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:20:50 PM AEST
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Your portrait would be a thing of absolute beauty......
Written to perfection as always
Roses for my daisy
Larry |
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Re: De Vinci Has Nothing On You
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by girlg0newrong on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:26:37 PM AEST
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Awesomely written poem. Such skill.
This was very good.
-kinzi- |
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Re: De Vinci Has Nothing On You
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 12:51:16 AM AEST
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| fantastic write. well presented. |
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Re: De Vinci Has Nothing On You
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by neveryours on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 06:16:28 PM AEST
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I am new to your poetry7 and have just had the most amazing time reading through some of your work - and following threads to your website and music - fun to discover.
Thanks for writing and for sharing - it was so wonderful to stumble across! |
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