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Questions Of The Universe
Contributed by
Dan666
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:14:11 PM in AEST
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At night I look up,
And stare at the stars,
For hours,
Just wondering,
What really is up there?
I think it's amazing,
Just staring at the beautiful dim lights,
That twinkle around the moon.
There's absolutley millions of stars up there,
Just too many to count.
And then i hear a " WOOSH! "
And i don't quite know what it was,
I am astonished,
I don't think it was a fire work?
And I don't think i could of heard a shooting star from earth,
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It just makes me wonder,
How far the universe goes?
If there's an end?
If there's a beginining?
What the atomospheres are like on different planets?
How many planets there are?
If there's a world like ours?
If we're alone?
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Re: Questions Of The Universe
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by Luinil on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:10:01 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem with great imagery* |
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Re: Questions Of The Universe
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 01:40:01 PM AEST
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Trust me Dan we are not alone! have you ever noticed how some stars are so bright then they suddenly dissapear?
But you know what?
the brightest stars always reapear!
excellent work.
Johnny.
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Re: Questions Of The Universe
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by AliB on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:43:42 AM AEST
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Wow!!!!!
There's certainly hidden depths to this life and I'm beginning to appreciate that my son has hidden depths too!!! Well done Dan, this is great, so many questions, I wonder if we'll ever be able to answer them all?
Ali xx (mum) |
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Re: Questions Of The Universe
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by Sinned on
Friday, 9th December 2005 @ 03:16:36 PM AEST
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Dan666
I am amazed at your thoughts and insight. The universe is forever expanding acording to sience.
Maybe our Lord even gave his life for others on another planet--just a thought.
Christianity teaches that we are made in His image--maybe when we die we are somewhat like Him and He alows us to create things also. After all the universe is ever-expanding.
I loved your poem "Keep it up"
Sinned
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