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Windows
Contributed by
Chaos
on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Windows to a new world
Mysterious and personal
I wonder as I look
I wonder to myself
What is he thinking?
How does he think?
What's on his mind?
What's on his mind?
How is he feeling?
Confused, depressed, content?
What does he remember?
Of childhood? Of now?
Windows to a new world
I look into his eyes
Does he wonder what I think?
What I remember? How I feel?
Copyright ©
Chaos
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2002-11-22 09:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Windows
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ramfire on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 10:19:00 AM AEST (User
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Like you poem a lot. I've been there myself a couple of times.
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Re: Windows
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 11:55:10 AM AEST (User
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Welcome to ypdc.. this is lovely..
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Re: Windows
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 12:58:54 PM AEST (User
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This is so beautiful, it does
make one wonder..Thanks for
sharing this one, i really enjoyed
it alot, Welcome to YPDC as well
Keep em' coming
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Re: Windows
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 03:24:17 PM AEST (User
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lovely work
i ve been through
this before and
im suprised i got
through it keep
writing in the future. |
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Re: Windows
(User Rating: 1 ) by Sarah22 on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 03:24:17 PM AEST (User
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lovely work
i ve been through
this before and
im suprised i got
through it keep
writing in the future. |
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