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feeling caged
Contributed by
elatednbliss
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 03:37:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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These arms
these chains
this life
it's holding me back
Love has slit my wrist
so many times
That I'm surprised
I'm still here
still breathing
this forsakened air
choking on everything
the promises
and the lies
spitting up these thoughts
puking my all
in another dirty tiolet
only to flush my emotions
down the john again
Great...
I just stepped into
another puddle
and I can't take my eyes
off my reflection
I'm locked
with my image
pulsing in ripples...
Copyright ©
elatednbliss
... [
2004-11-20 15:37:38]
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Re: feeling caged
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:06:32 AM AEST
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Re: feeling caged
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by n2dep2care on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:44:38 AM AEST
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Very wonderful. Full of images and emotion.
Laurie |
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