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Air Plane
Contributed by
all4him
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 03:18:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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LIfe is like an air plane
You go up, but eventually come down.
And when you do, your on the ground.
And sometimes feel your never found.
But if you've got that person
Who helps, instead of worsens
You'll hardly ever come down,
You'll never hit the ground,
And you'll always know you've been found.
Its as if that one person
Is like an air plane him or her self
When they are up flying,
So are you.
When they are down and not able to be found,
So are you.
That prson is your reason
To be who you are.
That person is your energy,
To get by every day.
That person is your,
AIR PLANE.
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all4him
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2004-11-20 15:18:52]
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Re: Air Plane
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 05:04:20 PM AEST
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| So try and a cute way of putting it into a poem. |
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Re: Air Plane
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by NeonHusky on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 04:15:52 PM AEST
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| i don't understand what the last comment says but do you write often? because the repetitive use of the same rhymes only work in very few poems. try to vary your rhymes, it kind of gives one message over and over again. keep working gj. |
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