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This Suicide Note
Contributed by
screwup
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 03:13:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I just cannot trust anymore
my heart has been broken and tore
"friends", they stab me in the back
leaving my heart withered and black
the pain is burning from the inside
making me think of suicide
smoke all the weed that you do
and tell me that you love me too
beat the hell out of me and leave me to die
cuz this will be the last time I cry
the last time the tears will pour
cuz I cannot live anymore
slice the blade thru my skin
cut again and again
I'm lost because I can no longer trust
he just wants me for lust
this is my life
this is why I turn to the knife
most of my life all I felt was pain
you wonder why I'm so insane
I'm a **** up and I don't really care
in my heart one more tare
all I can think about is dying
I cannot stop all this crying
I cut myself all over, slit my wrists and my throat
then use my blood to write this suicide note
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screwup
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2004-11-20 15:13:52]
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Re: This Suicide Note
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by lunartune on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 03:27:44 PM AEST
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| Wow , , , , I don't know what to say, really good peice of writing. A sad write. I hope that you can feel better. Please tell me you'll feel better. |
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Re: This Suicide Note
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 05:15:56 PM AEST
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You won't get empty advice from me.
I had a bad couple of nights this past
week. I don't know how I go on.
One day I make progress with a dream,
the next day everything goes to hell.
I hope for your sake you will find
something in your self worth saving
and something strong enough to save it.
Or at least try, and get you thru
the hell of life.
I feel like I could fail.
I just don't know anymore.
--Mothy
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Re: This Suicide Note
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 02:48:08 AM AEST
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i'm sorry if you see me as one of your friends that hasn't been here... but i couldn' have beenthis last fort night... i've been in and out of hospital...
this was darkly powerful and still is!
... it always will be brilliant! it's amazing how you can keep this together so well, but it's left me more concerned about you than ever!
... but i won't PM you if you don't wanna talk...
so for now i'll give you some space, but if you DO wanna chat i'm here...
just know that...
i'm here for you in the same way that you're here for me, ok? |
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